tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post3165955770001483287..comments2023-11-03T05:59:46.763-04:00Comments on Keeping Secrets: What I CarryKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-32992587187462787392013-09-15T17:45:14.000-04:002013-09-15T17:45:14.000-04:00What a glorious poem. I can feel that boulder on m...What a glorious poem. I can feel that boulder on my shoulders, too. It's heavy!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-3002190764362539152013-09-15T17:43:57.779-04:002013-09-15T17:43:57.779-04:00What a glorious poem. I can feel that boulder on m...What a glorious poem. I can feel that boulder on my shoulders, too. It's heavy!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-40478715055291118592013-09-12T09:57:34.451-04:002013-09-12T09:57:34.451-04:00I like the internal rhymes, and the layers of this...I like the internal rhymes, and the layers of this. Nice one, Karen.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-9004546935705156762013-09-10T21:14:31.719-04:002013-09-10T21:14:31.719-04:00a perfect quote to live by. your poem was a nice t...a perfect quote to live by. your poem was a nice tribute to that statement as well. i really like the sound that flowed throughout. have a great night~Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-6001352488820063742013-09-06T07:56:04.741-04:002013-09-06T07:56:04.741-04:00Drop the boulder and make it a stepping stone to y...Drop the boulder and make it a stepping stone to your pocket and pull out your ought. i spent my life doing as others told me which way was right and left. It took awhile to realize their left was my right.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-57427708664793768652013-09-06T03:25:49.986-04:002013-09-06T03:25:49.986-04:00Thinking around the subject - interesting. ♥Thinking around the subject - interesting. ♥Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-35832987640326323932013-09-06T00:38:40.718-04:002013-09-06T00:38:40.718-04:00like a nursery rhyme, but for grown-ups, so it bec...like a nursery rhyme, but for grown-ups, so it becomes nearly a mantra, or even a prayer ~ MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-13640294501741489462013-09-06T00:23:49.267-04:002013-09-06T00:23:49.267-04:00Love it....love the repetition Love it....love the repetition Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-1168956385824587012013-09-06T00:12:19.018-04:002013-09-06T00:12:19.018-04:00Well done - and I agree with Christopher - it read...Well done - and I agree with Christopher - it reads in a very polished way. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-2922170111995469512013-09-06T00:11:26.243-04:002013-09-06T00:11:26.243-04:00I LOVE this! SO MUCH! Stellar!I LOVE this! SO MUCH! Stellar!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-6194160346499363022013-09-05T22:33:51.620-04:002013-09-05T22:33:51.620-04:00Also, one of the better works concerning the Vietn...Also, one of the better works concerning the Vietnam war was titled, "The Things They Carried." That memory echoes for me here.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-89036516198066634052013-09-05T22:30:50.577-04:002013-09-05T22:30:50.577-04:00I believe this is an actual form, is it not? I do...I believe this is an actual form, is it not? I do not follow these, have not been schooled, but I think this form is actually something like a Persian song form or something. Some kind of song form. I like it very much and I do not know if what I ought is heavier than what I do which seems heaviest here, but I agree that the deepest parts are weighty in other ways. A smashing piece of work, dear.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-24328896555471630332013-09-05T22:25:19.866-04:002013-09-05T22:25:19.866-04:00I love this ... carrying no more than you ought to...I love this ... carrying no more than you ought to ..Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-60342146258137231692013-09-05T20:18:28.881-04:002013-09-05T20:18:28.881-04:00Oh that ought-ness - it is closer than anything el...Oh that ought-ness - it is closer than anything else. I like the repetition a lot - lovely & spare.The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-78463421882762445182013-09-05T20:07:23.421-04:002013-09-05T20:07:23.421-04:00Love this. Yes we do carry all of that stuff. Love this. Yes we do carry all of that stuff. aspiritofsimplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14870339828098281415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-3767278642196336092013-09-05T19:48:28.918-04:002013-09-05T19:48:28.918-04:00Well done! Love the way you seem to play with the ...Well done! Love the way you seem to play with the words and the repetitions. Thank you for sharing this.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-21004699158466433062013-09-05T19:09:58.993-04:002013-09-05T19:09:58.993-04:00How clever, I like the sharp and repetitive lines ...How clever, I like the sharp and repetitive lines ~ We do carry the heaviest part in our hearts ` Good to see you ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com