tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post3223523924832491461..comments2023-11-03T05:59:46.763-04:00Comments on Keeping Secrets: FastKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-48459659339057588242011-02-09T21:16:46.982-05:002011-02-09T21:16:46.982-05:00Wonderful photo to go with the wise words.Wonderful photo to go with the wise words.Roberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07082467654035464081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-4522746688211734262011-01-15T14:59:32.784-05:002011-01-15T14:59:32.784-05:00Nifty way of exploring the different meanings of t...Nifty way of exploring the different meanings of the word, and definitely excellent rhythm. Finish the song. :)Joseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-52575007585268311072011-01-13T18:18:15.917-05:002011-01-13T18:18:15.917-05:00Jingle - Thanks so much! I must join you at Jingle...Jingle - Thanks so much! I must join you at Jingle Poetry (if life quits interrupting my blog time)!<br /><br />Dulce - Thank you for the kind words. Let me know if you figure out how to slow things down...<br /><br />Debrah - Welcome to Keeping Secrets and thank you for your comment. Please come back!<br /><br />Dave - Glad it worked for you. It seems that everything is speeding up for me these days. <br /><br />Jason - I love the analogy -- and the warning.<br /><br />Rick - Thank you. I miss being able to comment on your work, but I respect and understand your decision.<br /><br />Mairi - Thank you so much! I don't remember where I found the image. I just checked to see that it wasn't copyrighted and used it. I should have acknowledged it, I suppose. Isn't it intriguing, though?<br /><br />Tess - Oh, me too! I try not to look!<br /><br />Calli - Thank you, thank you!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-23588685032688028902011-01-13T12:31:41.674-05:002011-01-13T12:31:41.674-05:00Definitely a ride and a grand one at that!
Karen,...Definitely a ride and a grand one at that! <br />Karen, your transformation here has been a wonderful thing to witness.<br /><br />Also, a lovely play on words.Callihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00354988534434872490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-23038898951550676282011-01-13T09:12:40.335-05:002011-01-13T09:12:40.335-05:00Gravity is certainly doing its thing with my body ...Gravity is certainly doing its thing with my body these days! That pesky jester.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-3096713769552175012011-01-12T18:45:10.269-05:002011-01-12T18:45:10.269-05:00The structure provided by the rhyme in this one is...The structure provided by the rhyme in this one is just brilliant. Perfectly realised - the "fast past" actually brings the reader down. What's the image? It's wonderful too.Mairihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09329522168121977658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-22353326913975433362011-01-10T23:39:42.703-05:002011-01-10T23:39:42.703-05:00K
I felt the fall
the dizziness
and the landing
no...K<br />I felt the fall<br />the dizziness<br />and the landing<br />no one handles words with more tenderness<br />~rickRickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12466743523566419268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-14356303247432792622011-01-10T18:30:23.762-05:002011-01-10T18:30:23.762-05:00If it were a plane, it would be time to pull back ...If it were a plane, it would be time to pull back on the stick.<br /><br />Too much descent too fast has a tendency to set up an interview with the ground.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-66593780284353147392011-01-10T06:49:10.202-05:002011-01-10T06:49:10.202-05:00I was really taken along with this. It works 100% ...I was really taken along with this. It works 100% for me. The Jester holds the mask - absolutely!Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-37718690892422782562011-01-09T01:16:19.346-05:002011-01-09T01:16:19.346-05:00Dear Karen:
I find extraordinary your work. I adm...Dear Karen: <br />I find extraordinary your work. I admire this kind of poetry for exploring in the mind and soul. <br />Congratulations!<br />Debrah RiddletonDebrah Riddletonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08391008109321924194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-77434795192598993412011-01-08T16:37:06.198-05:002011-01-08T16:37:06.198-05:00yeah... it does feel so.
oh but how greatly you...yeah... it does feel so.<br />oh but how greatly you've written the words to explain what that is...<br /><br />brilliant!!!!Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-17204779535032640122011-01-08T15:02:17.269-05:002011-01-08T15:02:17.269-05:00love the flow...
what a dazzling imagery your wor...love the flow...<br /><br />what a dazzling imagery your words painted here.<br />have a lovely weekend.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.com