tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post7212142827305236285..comments2023-11-03T05:59:46.763-04:00Comments on Keeping Secrets: Undone.Karenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-37371319686909655972013-12-23T19:17:39.380-05:002013-12-23T19:17:39.380-05:00Whew! This poem takes my breath away! We have to...Whew! This poem takes my breath away! We have to resist 'dying' as long as we possibly can.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-40810353378219258362013-12-23T15:41:01.062-05:002013-12-23T15:41:01.062-05:00I very much agree with the other comments. But som...I very much agree with the other comments. But sometimes it is the overcoming of adversity that brings out the spirit and disciplined conforming to and refining of dogmatic performance that sets free creative perfection. So I wonder where the bright line is to be drawn between supportive encouragement and narrow minded oppression.Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-63519363922480740922013-12-23T11:17:57.117-05:002013-12-23T11:17:57.117-05:00Excellent poem, Karen, and full to overflowing wit...Excellent poem, Karen, and full to overflowing with wisdom. Merry Christmas!! xoMarionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-78731523656332422142013-12-23T10:53:13.517-05:002013-12-23T10:53:13.517-05:00A most powerful poem, dear friend...and so very tr...A most powerful poem, dear friend...and so very true.Carolina Lintheadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16335905555994442416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-7649247758891995342013-12-23T07:24:17.518-05:002013-12-23T07:24:17.518-05:00Maybe a little less education and a little more kn...Maybe a little less education and a little more knowledge?the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-15552288525223628912013-12-23T06:24:13.313-05:002013-12-23T06:24:13.313-05:00And being made to conform clips many a wing...how ...And being made to conform clips many a wing...how right you are...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-58895830939875406052013-12-22T22:54:51.953-05:002013-12-22T22:54:51.953-05:00what a cruel world we've created for our littl...what a cruel world we've created for our little butterflies.....the helplessnes is so pronounced....very nicely put<br />up....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-63069155657510849452013-12-22T22:18:23.575-05:002013-12-22T22:18:23.575-05:00Poor thing! Either which way it would result in de...Poor thing! Either which way it would result in demise. There has to be salvation! Nicely Karen!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-42847117813169024502013-12-22T21:59:49.298-05:002013-12-22T21:59:49.298-05:00I hope this poem gets many more comments. I often ...I hope this poem gets many more comments. I often feel the same myself. I don't want my wings to be clipped, my spark to be stolen or my song to be snatched. In a fiercely competitive world rejection can do all these to a human being. Sometimes i just feel like being picked up and taken to a safe place. But I have the face the harsh reality that in the end each man has to fight for himself. I can't tell you how this poem resonated with me. Merry Christmas!madhumakhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09624377766663002237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-4100333131515243652013-12-22T21:56:42.904-05:002013-12-22T21:56:42.904-05:00Whew. That is exactly right. Whew. That is exactly right. Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com