tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post8624216767104979391..comments2023-11-03T05:59:46.763-04:00Comments on Keeping Secrets: Preposition, PostKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-37139031681574577072012-11-10T07:34:02.294-05:002012-11-10T07:34:02.294-05:00wow, there is a definite background story to these...wow, there is a definite background story to these balladical words. or swords.<br />very clever by telling so much by saying not much at all.<br />it rings within quite a while.<br />congratulations.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-87423087937634808862012-11-05T14:05:12.749-05:002012-11-05T14:05:12.749-05:00wordplay
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confusionwordplay<br />swordplay<br />relationship<br />confusionAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-61805270586334250262012-11-05T09:24:50.774-05:002012-11-05T09:24:50.774-05:00"your words are swords"
profound, lovely..."your words are swords"<br />profound, lovely piece... Bing Yaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-50269558796979640832012-11-05T08:08:13.147-05:002012-11-05T08:08:13.147-05:00This is an excellent poem which moves from the con...This is an excellent poem which moves from the concrete to the abstract. I really enjoyed it.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-23565884981330852602012-11-04T21:28:40.359-05:002012-11-04T21:28:40.359-05:00Very nice. I'm happy I found your blog and go...Very nice. I'm happy I found your blog and got to read your poem. Peace,<br />Siggi in Downeast Maine, USAsiggiofmainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12619003987159808104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-40123352289975800332012-11-04T17:56:12.147-05:002012-11-04T17:56:12.147-05:00So vividly drawn, one can see and feel it. Awesome...So vividly drawn, one can see and feel it. Awesome! Love the pre and post rendition.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-91481656365381084442012-11-04T17:36:48.443-05:002012-11-04T17:36:48.443-05:00I like both Pre and post position. It's true, ...I like both Pre and post position. It's true, words are one of our best weapons, and we needs to use them with care, sadly, most of us, don't. Powerful truths in this.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-27873102438876623962012-11-04T13:13:22.445-05:002012-11-04T13:13:22.445-05:00Very clever too, I think! The second one is the fi...Very clever too, I think! The second one is the first one without prepositions, no - at least more or less (?), and it all makes sense too (with a bit of imagination). Above all, it reads beautifully and draws me in, and demands a reaction. I love it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-28931607583432184672012-11-04T11:34:27.982-05:002012-11-04T11:34:27.982-05:00I love it Karen. Striking, a bit ominous, and ful...I love it Karen. Striking, a bit ominous, and full of mystery. Great stuff.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-60650906938819762792012-11-04T10:25:07.780-05:002012-11-04T10:25:07.780-05:00Staccato bursts of repetitions. Nicely done Karen,...Staccato bursts of repetitions. Nicely done Karen, nice word-play!<br /><br />Hank kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-40922499545167294232012-11-04T09:58:52.866-05:002012-11-04T09:58:52.866-05:00Yes, dark indeed. Effective repetitions. This p...Yes, dark indeed. Effective repetitions. This poem could be made into a short story. "Your words are swords." Stunning.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-60000713216282981822012-11-03T11:21:33.053-04:002012-11-03T11:21:33.053-04:00Wordplay like swordplay...in the dark.Wordplay like swordplay...in the dark.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.com