tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post2313816597943896692..comments2023-11-03T05:59:46.763-04:00Comments on Keeping Secrets: BirthdayKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-22978947407856413492014-12-08T05:49:44.762-05:002014-12-08T05:49:44.762-05:00Coming from you -- yay!!!Coming from you -- yay!!!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-74148053375187091132014-12-08T05:48:38.507-05:002014-12-08T05:48:38.507-05:00Such a nice thing to say! Thank you!Such a nice thing to say! Thank you!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-65309798188567665872014-12-06T16:19:15.045-05:002014-12-06T16:19:15.045-05:00One of the most enjoyable poems I have read in mon...One of the most enjoyable poems I have read in months!Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-63110288855280870102014-12-05T11:03:10.986-05:002014-12-05T11:03:10.986-05:00I like the message of the poem as much as the rhyt...I like the message of the poem as much as the rhythm of it. I read a few times out loud because it's a fun piece. Well done.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-18240653725197164902014-12-05T09:47:28.442-05:002014-12-05T09:47:28.442-05:00Excellent rhythm. I like this very much.Excellent rhythm. I like this very much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-37437644898568041312014-12-05T02:36:36.162-05:002014-12-05T02:36:36.162-05:00I like your rhyme and that jubilant close, Karen!I like your rhyme and that jubilant close, Karen!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-7494172024072912302014-12-04T22:07:49.872-05:002014-12-04T22:07:49.872-05:00Beautiful, rhythmic. I would love to hear a readin...Beautiful, rhythmic. I would love to hear a reading of it. Thanks so much for writing for the challenge!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-37587769294150529892014-12-04T20:12:07.115-05:002014-12-04T20:12:07.115-05:00I love the b words here: Before, behind, betwixt,...I love the b words here: Before, behind, betwixt, between<br />and that ending like a clarion call for the angels ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-71701223755842885832014-12-04T19:58:44.935-05:002014-12-04T19:58:44.935-05:00Oh fabulous! I wish I had written it so I could us...Oh fabulous! I wish I had written it so I could use it for my Christmas poem :)The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-43482768762154356852014-12-04T15:44:03.640-05:002014-12-04T15:44:03.640-05:00I love your poem, lyrical and whimsical,,I want to...I love your poem, lyrical and whimsical,,I want to sneak outside after dark to see if I can find them. :-)Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-51770872297514947772014-12-04T15:03:34.960-05:002014-12-04T15:03:34.960-05:00I am sure I have heard these revels in the night.I am sure I have heard these revels in the night.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-31396353891120206272014-12-04T14:38:03.024-05:002014-12-04T14:38:03.024-05:00luv the beat throughout and the celebration of ang...luv the beat throughout and the celebration of angels to end with<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-45219583751198659982014-12-04T11:45:48.608-05:002014-12-04T11:45:48.608-05:00This poem has a great rhythm in the lines, buildin...This poem has a great rhythm in the lines, building to an effective climax.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-4408559525038012252014-12-04T09:38:35.465-05:002014-12-04T09:38:35.465-05:00Ah!! such an enchanting and musical piece!!Ah!! such an enchanting and musical piece!!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com