tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post5341161561278947123..comments2023-11-03T05:59:46.763-04:00Comments on Keeping Secrets: Word of the LordKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-12205499458038878162009-10-18T10:39:19.938-04:002009-10-18T10:39:19.938-04:00Dear Karen,
Such a deep faith and heartbreak...Dear Karen,<br /><br /> Such a deep faith and heartbreak are<br />expressed here, however your prose enters<br />in with joy.<br /><br />MarieMariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05469330580965664454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-44488860585432367712009-10-13T11:41:58.462-04:002009-10-13T11:41:58.462-04:00How time and experiences shape our casual and yout...How time and experiences shape our casual and youthful brightness into darker pain and leads us to new places, or arms, to land in. <br /><br />I could feel the years in this one. The ripening of a soul and faith. Very poignant, Karen, and very beautiful.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-32488506314996859832009-10-11T11:40:49.213-04:002009-10-11T11:40:49.213-04:00Margaret - Thanks. I wonder how many have had the ...Margaret - Thanks. I wonder how many have had the experience of the last stanza?<br /><br />Joseph - Isn't it interesting how the threads of our lives are interwoven?<br /><br />Thanks, Rachel!<br /><br />TWM - You know, I think it's in the tears, but wasn't it in the book that I read that even Jesus wept for his dying friend?Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-44429956984548687212009-10-11T08:33:44.326-04:002009-10-11T08:33:44.326-04:00and tell me then is the lords word found in the pa...and tell me then is the lords word found in the pages of a book or the tears?the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-90701462128865995182009-10-10T14:50:59.104-04:002009-10-10T14:50:59.104-04:00The power of memories, cherished moments and laugh...The power of memories, cherished moments and laughter. Beautiful, Karen.RachelWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18225401230724459199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-60742353047141971452009-10-10T14:25:18.721-04:002009-10-10T14:25:18.721-04:00Excellent work... an interesting take on how two c...Excellent work... an interesting take on how two completely different moments with two different emotions can be connected by something so innocuous.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-34390670513625201132009-10-10T11:30:49.777-04:002009-10-10T11:30:49.777-04:00This is a beautiful reminiscence Karen, coming bac...This is a beautiful reminiscence Karen, coming back full circle. Full of tender feelings and emotions. The last lines leaves the reader with a gentle sadness. <br />Another wonderful poem from you Karen, wonderful and touching.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17286909482780350161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-76362642012801843822009-10-10T09:03:50.050-04:002009-10-10T09:03:50.050-04:00Thanks, Dave - It's interesting to me that as ...Thanks, Dave - It's interesting to me that as a writer, I really don't know what others will find appealing. I nearly didn't post this because I thought it would not appeal. I'm happy to know it did.<br /><br />Fareed - Welcome, and thank you! I'm laughing!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-86399151158181118242009-10-10T06:33:13.515-04:002009-10-10T06:33:13.515-04:00Jesus!
You nailed it.Jesus!<br /><br />You nailed it.Fareedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01083486037471471403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-37551353366728952832009-10-09T06:58:25.240-04:002009-10-09T06:58:25.240-04:00This has got to be one of your absolute best. Mayb...This has got to be one of your absolute best. Maybe it's the old evangelist in me, deeply dyed, but it appeals to me on all sorts of levels - and the image is a just-right accompaniment. Really, excellently done.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-48539336924714135292009-10-09T06:01:49.760-04:002009-10-09T06:01:49.760-04:00Jules - You always say the nicest things, and you ...Jules - You always say the nicest things, and you are so right on. I nearly used "white coats" in the last stanza but I didn't want to be too obvious. I think the "you" would surprise the readers. :-) Thank you for your ever appreciated support!<br /><br />Jana - Yay! I'm glad you were able to conquer blogger! I love the image of dogma and devotion - that could be a poem in itself. You are so right, but I think how sad it is to neglect devotion until it's needed...Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-64145640725012143072009-10-09T00:24:02.175-04:002009-10-09T00:24:02.175-04:00sometimes dogma and devotion are intertwined lover...sometimes dogma and devotion are intertwined lovers<br /><br />ps i think i figured out how i can comment on your blog again. :) hopefully that's a good thing~bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-6358995136732566632009-10-08T19:07:52.420-04:002009-10-08T19:07:52.420-04:00I love the language in the poem and the lovely voi...I love the language in the poem and the lovely voice that is so Karen! And yeah, boy. I've seen those men in white shirts, too. The ones I see are on bicycles. I sort of feel sorry for them in an odd sort of way, because nobody wants to see them coming...ha! Even when it's so hot, they're all dressed up and pedaling away. <br /><br />But I also love the intrigue at the end, the "you" in the poem who is calling on men in white shirts. I imagine a whole different type of men in white shirts in the ending. I love that sense of mystery that gets a whole book of stories swirling in my mind. I always say "beautiful" when I read your poems, but they are. Absolutely beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-34044371059247785952009-10-08T18:26:27.247-04:002009-10-08T18:26:27.247-04:00John - Thank you.
Kaye - Your comment on the lan...John - Thank you. <br /><br />Kaye - Your comment on the language, especially, is appreciated. Coming from you, it means a great deal to me.<br /><br />Rick - I wish I'd have remembered Jonah and David when I wrote this. It would've been a different tone, for sure! Yeah, I love Marion. I wish I could hang out with her in real life.<br /><br />Rose Marie - "Gems of time" culled from the treasures of our lives... Thank you for that thought.<br /><br />joaquin - There is a whole world - a whole lifetime - in this one. To tell you the truth, I'm not crazy about this as poetry - not what I consider one of my better poems - but it is honest. Somehow, that matters in this one. Thank you, too, for your comment on the language. I love words!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-86315725325459111192009-10-08T15:21:53.507-04:002009-10-08T15:21:53.507-04:00there are whole worlds between the hiding from and...there are whole worlds between the hiding from and falling upon - and they spin wonderfully in this. i feel a blend of fear and faith and remorse and atonement from the "lone penitent", and though the tears seem inevitable, it also seems they will fall more for what is unspoken than what is expressed here. and i agree with k about the "ripeness" - each word is just right.joaquin carvelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-22797579736936156022009-10-08T01:02:24.599-04:002009-10-08T01:02:24.599-04:00We have but to remember - those gems of time, fr...We have but to remember - those gems of time, from which we cull the treasures of resolve. Tears, those liquid diamonds that sparkle with purpose - the flow of emotion that cleanses the soul. Yours is a poem, truly, "Word of the Lord," the cycles of BEING. Thank you for its beauty.Rose Marie Raccioppihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12327247225256540829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-15742372873004585572009-10-07T23:24:23.034-04:002009-10-07T23:24:23.034-04:00Jonah tried it-got swallowed. David said it can...Jonah tried it-got swallowed. David said it can't be done. But love remembering youth with you. and how bout that Marion? Sheesh, anyone she hasn't corrupted? ~rickRikkijhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10933627704520555139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-75989730528516496992009-10-07T22:16:30.056-04:002009-10-07T22:16:30.056-04:00What a purposeful and personal account of somethin...What a purposeful and personal account of something much deeper than what is read here. It startles me with its familiarity.<br /><br /> I remember a time when we would hide from Bible Salesmen in their white shirts...walking miles a day...knocking on every door in the town. I remember sitting on our porch swing with one young man, when I was about twelve, and thinking, "Do you really love God that much or do you just need a job?" <br /><br />I love, how in your poems, you test each word for ripeness, like buying fruit - and choose just the right one.K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-73316057232215714532009-10-07T19:18:59.912-04:002009-10-07T19:18:59.912-04:00This one is full of meaning and rings deep in the ...This one is full of meaning and rings deep in the heart. Words cannot fully explain but your poem expresses it in the right meter and tone.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07774058959178034129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-3662667696381140022009-10-07T18:32:08.276-04:002009-10-07T18:32:08.276-04:00Jason - We truly never know what we'll be hand...Jason - We truly never know what we'll be handed. Better be grateful for every day!<br /><br />Chris - You are so right! Thinking of you right now, too.<br /><br />Calli - Thanks!<br /><br />Willow - The uniform is certainly recognizable, isn't it? And you're right - a part of our culture. (By the way, if you say you're Catholic, they'll leave! :-D<br /><br />Michelle - All is well, thank you. Really. Thanks for being a faithful reader and for your kind comments.<br /><br />kondratas - Welcome, and thanks for visiting and commenting. A lesson in humility is a great way to characterize this. <br /><br />Glynis - Miss Award Winner! Thank you for your kind comment.<br /><br />Jennifer - It's so nice to see you! I hope all is well with you. It brightens my day just to see your name and know you're still with us! Thanks.<br /><br />Vesper - kondratas said it well: a lesson in humility, but I think you cut right to the heart of it, too, the mixture of emotions that show how flawed and human we are. Thank you.<br /><br />Marion - :-D Thank you so much for your kind words and you friendship! I'd LOVE to have seen those little guys watching movies, getting high on the residuals! So funny! I'm glad you told that! Next time... ;-)Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-40167365390243459182009-10-07T17:46:29.146-04:002009-10-07T17:46:29.146-04:00Karen, the sheer beauty of what you have written c...Karen, the sheer beauty of what you have written casts a shadow over the meaning for me. No, not a shadow, more like a transluscent veil through which I see your strong and courageous heart beating, beating, beating. Bless you, dear poet-friend of my heart!<br /><br />PS: When the white-shirted guys came to our house early in our marriage in the 70's we invited them in and corrupted them...we took them to see Dr. Zhivago (they weren't *allowed* to see movies, they told us...we took that as a challenge and convinced them to go) and even offered them a doobie first. They declined, but I'm certain they both got a good secondhand buzz. Tee-Hee. It was fun. Thanks for jiggling my memory banks. You rock, my friend!Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-87906217969625637222009-10-07T12:16:58.066-04:002009-10-07T12:16:58.066-04:00Karen, how nostalgically this comes full circle......Karen, how nostalgically this comes full circle... in a way... A very delicate and beautiful poem, ravelling sadness and joy, impetuosity and regret, just as life does...<br />xoxoxoVesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-6904593065149992502009-10-07T11:49:01.010-04:002009-10-07T11:49:01.010-04:00Karen, what a great juxtaposition in this--a situa...Karen, what a great juxtaposition in this--a situation turning itself on its head, if you will. We run, but we still need deeply, and I think it is the human condition to seek, at least privately.<br /><br />This is really beautiful. Tragic, but not hopelessly so.jazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09559917865938143791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-9102827205619462022009-10-07T11:13:04.712-04:002009-10-07T11:13:04.712-04:00Gentle memoirs, written with a soft tone and sadne...Gentle memoirs, written with a soft tone and sadness.Glynis Peters https://www.blogger.com/profile/01175378917872403609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-22445577723862873392009-10-07T11:12:55.488-04:002009-10-07T11:12:55.488-04:00beautiful and sad. i guess that's the epitome ...beautiful and sad. i guess that's the epitome of a lesson in humility. an interesting take. lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com