tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post6166304845534116438..comments2023-11-03T05:59:46.763-04:00Comments on Keeping Secrets: Heaven, Earth, and ManKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-4977221310387426812011-06-03T18:33:37.136-04:002011-06-03T18:33:37.136-04:00Beautiful poem! Love it :)
Motivational PoemsBeautiful poem! Love it :)<br /><a href="http://marinelareka.com/?cat=31" rel="nofollow">Motivational Poems </a>Short Poemshttp://marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-31307071648124398882011-02-17T23:32:45.601-05:002011-02-17T23:32:45.601-05:00K
well, there better be a God tablet or I think
it...K<br />well, there better be a God tablet or I think<br />it will all fail<br />one is proven to fail<br />one is beyond our control<br />and the last beyond our reach<br />eat drink and be merry<br />for tomorrow we die<br />lovely write again, you<br />~rickRickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12466743523566419268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-55666120635700098292011-02-10T18:49:13.678-05:002011-02-10T18:49:13.678-05:00so much going on here indeed.....all good...thanks...so much going on here indeed.....all good...thanks for thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-44549905599736744702011-02-10T09:56:09.875-05:002011-02-10T09:56:09.875-05:00So many layers...
ransomSo many layers...<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/02/ransom.html" rel="nofollow">ransom</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-48560505013823322422011-02-09T13:55:48.594-05:002011-02-09T13:55:48.594-05:00A beautiful poem, full of the many unanswered ques...A beautiful poem, full of the many unanswered questions. Nicely done to prompt.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-77475824415724148682011-02-09T12:30:40.347-05:002011-02-09T12:30:40.347-05:00A meditation that results in a heartfelt prayer. L...A meditation that results in a heartfelt prayer. Love how you used the rhyme and the tightness of the structure to mimic that ladder and the rungs to be climbed. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/02/09/thank-you-neil-reid/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-86849213456294115492011-02-09T09:00:26.799-05:002011-02-09T09:00:26.799-05:00I enjoyed the philosophical, questioning nature of...I enjoyed the philosophical, questioning nature of this poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-46032522037025102252011-02-09T08:09:43.144-05:002011-02-09T08:09:43.144-05:00-So many questions make a poem that seems like a s...-So many questions make a poem that seems like a serial story, as though you may need to come back to it, write the answers.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-73095272447817406122011-02-09T06:52:46.878-05:002011-02-09T06:52:46.878-05:00Beautiful and depthful response to this prompt. I ...Beautiful and depthful response to this prompt. I love the question posed in the last line!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-13833217705002740842011-02-09T06:01:13.482-05:002011-02-09T06:01:13.482-05:00What a beautiful poem, Karen. Like a word puzzle, ...What a beautiful poem, Karen. Like a word puzzle, a spoken word, a holy recitation, echoing the mystery of life.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-30434033124122365402011-02-09T05:45:24.833-05:002011-02-09T05:45:24.833-05:00Well, I'm joining the chorus: "Mystery Pl...Well, I'm joining the chorus: "Mystery Play" was my first thought - partly, i agree with Joseph, on account of the image, which intrigued me from the beginning. It's a fascinating post, no doubt about it, and very thought-provoking.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-17483552600145688222011-02-08T08:53:40.174-05:002011-02-08T08:53:40.174-05:00you have greatly chosen an inspriring photo to acc...you have greatly chosen an inspriring photo to accompany this clver poem.<br />i hope for the 'ladder to each' version. :)SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-88943060192917010252011-02-06T19:42:28.870-05:002011-02-06T19:42:28.870-05:00Intriguing... and Titus is right, it sounds like a...Intriguing... and Titus is right, it sounds like a mystery play. (The image you chose helps with that too.) There's lots of symmetry that is sneaking along beneath the surface...Joseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-75028252700466939322011-02-06T16:31:13.125-05:002011-02-06T16:31:13.125-05:00Beautifully done, and I love the tight rhyme and s...Beautifully done, and I love the tight rhyme and stanzaic form. Resonant, to me, of a Mystery Play and language aside, definitely something of the medieval mindset in it.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-51756123733928469982011-02-06T09:11:15.310-05:002011-02-06T09:11:15.310-05:00Me thinks it be the earth itself that bridges the ...Me thinks it be the earth itself that bridges the divide and spans the distance between man and the heavens. we leave a mark upon her and depending on the truth of the mark we find the shorter or longer span to cross from the physical to the eternal.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-18779645290220270102011-02-05T19:40:55.596-05:002011-02-05T19:40:55.596-05:00I love this. There's so much in there - I'...I love this. There's so much in there - I'll have to come back & read it again.<br /><br />I'm reading a book about the Bible (The Good Book by Peter Gomes)& the author sort of addresses the conundrum of people & places & this written word. An eternal conundrum, isn't it?The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.com