tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post6455547654254155387..comments2023-11-03T05:59:46.763-04:00Comments on Keeping Secrets: Lines Written Upon Feeling a Warm Breeze on My Face for the First Time
This SpringKarenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-67624339320543336052013-05-13T13:04:23.407-04:002013-05-13T13:04:23.407-04:00Ha! I'm moving through your posts backward, so...Ha! I'm moving through your posts backward, so I just came here from the serious, poignant poem about the teen in $100 jeans at the bus stop, which moved me quite a bit. Now I go back to mow with a silly grin. Not today, crows and buzzards...you will have to wait to dine on this one :-)Carolina Lintheadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16335905555994442416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-37679359957636560272013-04-22T06:58:38.875-04:002013-04-22T06:58:38.875-04:00Sometimes you just have to go where the poem takes...Sometimes you just have to go where the poem takes you! The last couplet made me smile.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-75311147552589512552013-04-22T06:49:14.990-04:002013-04-22T06:49:14.990-04:00Odd when you think of it, maggots are good for hum...Odd when you think of it, maggots are good for humanity until they grow to be fly's.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-39101736456163736362013-04-21T17:02:16.133-04:002013-04-21T17:02:16.133-04:00"Just save me from the maggot's hell!&quo..."Just save me from the maggot's hell!" Amazing what a warm spring breeze will produce. You made it work. Nice.JayGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817675980200134668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-83564978533029984832013-04-21T09:48:50.312-04:002013-04-21T09:48:50.312-04:00Don't lay with the maggots for this was not ba...Don't lay with the maggots for this was not bad and I enjoyed the rhythm and the take on the prompt. Thank you for the smile.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10020430647050532416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-85562048533198423482013-04-21T04:40:18.190-04:002013-04-21T04:40:18.190-04:00Are we talking snails here?
Let's get the blig...Are we talking snails here?<br />Let's get the blighters.<br />Warm breezes in sharp contrast to evil weevils, ants, slugs, earwigs......<br />Ah well, the rough with the smooth.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-69871236598015116322013-04-21T03:31:48.388-04:002013-04-21T03:31:48.388-04:00ha - who wants to be with the maggots when spring ...ha - who wants to be with the maggots when spring just started....Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-10662588580393521312013-04-21T02:14:07.265-04:002013-04-21T02:14:07.265-04:00Nice connection between the title and a the maggot...Nice connection between the title and a the maggot's hell ;-)brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-71107308523973109512013-04-20T18:52:17.636-04:002013-04-20T18:52:17.636-04:00Lovely rhythm and rhyme... I especially like the 2...Lovely rhythm and rhyme... I especially like the 2nd and 3rd couplets.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5474566446391728432.post-88764811265709911432013-04-20T18:07:14.027-04:002013-04-20T18:07:14.027-04:00I like the feast of culinary art/compost ~ The rh...I like the feast of culinary art/compost ~ The rhyming couplets are delightful to read ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com