Sunday, January 25, 2009

Writing and Rewriting

The thing I've learned about writing poetry is that the poem is never finished. I began this long narrative on December 21, and I know I'll continue revising. I thought I'd post it, though, to get feedback on this form. This is something totally new to me. Here goes:


  1. And it's a good thing that you posted it! Thank you! :-)

  2. Sometimes it's nice to let them be frozen moments in time. A wispy emotion captured.