I do love lines (of verse), of course, and I have written other love lines and posted them at other times, but for today, for right now, these are the ones:
Love's Workshop
A jagged blade,
Rough cut,
Made for demolition;
Nothing austere,
You chew through
Sinew and bone,
Leave bloodstains
On the cold stone floor.
And this one for my much-loved husband...
Global Memories, Permanent
I want to
thank you
for seeing me
through darkness,
for handing me
my memory,
for holding on
when everything
was gone.
Holding on is one of the best things a spouse can do...
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem to your husband. I could completely relate as my husband did all those things for me too.
ReplyDeleteI feel voyeuristic, reading the second one. The first, I am more comfortable with it, but they are both excellent.
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