Poplar Creek
Rocks covered with moss,
rough bark I scratch
against my palm,
the swarm jousting
in a patch of light
that sneaks beneath the trees,
the inimitable sound
of water fleeing
over sand and stone,
the silly smile I wear
when wandering alone
as a child wears
when hoarding secret treasure,
the need for pen,
for words, for record,
the small winged thing
that rides inside with me
when I come
to tell my pleasures.
Beautiful, Karen.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Willow!
DeleteSo lovely...I felt like I was walking along too, with that heart-lift one feels in nature's beauty.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sherry. "My heart leaps up...".
DeleteYou tell your secret pleasures so well I smile. :)
ReplyDeleteYour backyard is magical.
It is, Gnome, a place of delight! ;-)
DeleteI can relate to this- that need to write about a moment, so beautiful this one is!
ReplyDeleteSo we both need to remember our pens!
DeleteIt is really good that one has pens and words to share the pleasures of one's backyard! Thanks for jamming with us, Karen!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure, Mary. I was one of the Bus poets back before the Jam. I'm happy to be here.
DeleteSpeaking for all the crusty barked old trees I just wanted to thank you for the scratch. That was just what we needed right then.
ReplyDeleteYou and my bear paw! ;-)
DeleteI wear a silly smile when I wander in the woods too :) I really really should do it more often! AND remember to carry a notepad with me.
ReplyDelete(I once had a job where people often stopped me in the hallway & asked me to do things once I got to my desk. Even 10 years ago I had a hard time remembering everything, so I started wearing a little flip notepad with a pen on a string around my neck. Ha!)
I often end up writing with my thumbs because all I have is my phone. Kind of loses the Romanticism, doesn't it?
Deletesmiles...i love nature personally...and i retreat to the woods often to find my solace...i love the bit about the little thing inside you as well...always keep my notebook handy just in case you know...smiles...
ReplyDeleteYour comment makes me smile, Brian! I think I'm happiest surrounded by woods. My childhood was spent roaming the hills.
DeleteTelling your pleasures ... that is what poetry means to me .. this is entrancing.
ReplyDeleteI felt your forest as you described it--could hear the sounds and smell the smells and see that patch of sunlight. Thanks for this moment.
ReplyDeleteThanks for going along with me, Peggy.
DeleteBeautiful, Karen. I do feel like a child when I get outside in nature with my pencil and paper.
ReplyDeleteThere's nowhere else I can really lose myself like I can in nature -- except for when I'm writing, of course. Thanks for visiting, Laurie.
DeleteWhat a beautiful scene about a place I want to be, too, with my pen and paper of course. Now that is inspiration!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Judy! I appreciate your comments.
DeleteI don't think poets/writers can ever not write about nature and it's beautiful sights and sounds. This is lovely!
ReplyDeleteI agree, Daydreamertoo! Not writing is not an option!
DeleteThis really touched me as I read it. Thank you for this. It calls up memories of wandering in the woods as a child.
ReplyDeleteI spent my youth roaming the woods, too, Carol. I think that's why I'm happiest there stiill. Thanks for your comment.
DeleteYou have taken me on your journey Karen...this is lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming along with me, Carrie!
Delete'the small winged thing that rides inside with me'
ReplyDeleteLOve that!
Thanks, TFE!
DeleteI'm glad you came along with me, Lordana!
ReplyDeleteSomehow a forest doesn't quite seem complete without the sound of running water. Beautiful imagery in this!
ReplyDeleteOh, this, every word speaks directly to my nature loving smiling soul. What a beautiful write, Karen, I was right in that moment with you. :)
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