and revealing myself one poem at a time
I love this - the rhythm of the poem mimics the beating of the wings :)I saw some buzzards in a tree yesterday & before I realized what they were I thought, "those are mighty big leaves!"
Yes, I see it! And how tempting to think of a "murder of Crows" as both magical and villainous. I love the rhythm--as your commenter above points out--a deft use of feet and caesuras to mimic in form the content of your insight!
i liked the expresison: 'peppered my sight' :)i don't know much about rhythm, but since other commenters suggested, i read the poem aloud and found the words do reflect the strong clapping-like movements of all those wings.