not sure i would want to be on the bottom of the ocean...but i do love the quiet that invades when you are under the surface....and the water seems to hold you suspended in a hug...
Quiet at the bottom. One can feel so peaceful. The fun is to rise slowly and feel the surge of bubbles and swirling waters around before reaching the surface! Nicely Karen!
I recently came across your blog and have been reading along. I thought I would leave my first comment. I don't know what to say except that I have enjoyed reading. Nice blog. I will keep visiting this blog very often..
Love the flow of this & the interesting imagery!!
ReplyDeletenot sure i would want to be on the bottom of the ocean...but i do love the quiet that invades when you are under the surface....and the water seems to hold you suspended in a hug...
ReplyDeleteI love the terse and sharp imagery of silence ~
ReplyDeleteOh wow. So good. Very good. No my place to be but I feel it in your words.
ReplyDeletechrysalis quiet - you poem leaves one expecting an explosion of change, each line is concise and tight
ReplyDeleteQuiet at the bottom. One can feel so peaceful. The fun is to rise slowly and feel the surge of bubbles and swirling waters around before reaching the surface! Nicely Karen!
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chrysalis quiet..cool.. and what a cool image to go with it as well... there's something peaceful in the ocean's embrace
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ReplyDeleteI recently came across your blog and have been reading along. I thought I would leave my first comment. I don't know what to say except that I have enjoyed reading. Nice blog. I will keep visiting this blog very often..
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