and revealing myself one poem at a time
In apology for LAZARUS. ;-)
apt capture of your subject...powerful piece.
beautiful.... what a great song!
fab, they're so much clearer these days too, without the leaves
black frocked choirboys...PERFECT! :-)
I absolutely love this. I will stop in the middle of the road and get out and look and listen when birds are gathering like this. I love to see them in the sky moving as one! I love every word and image here!
In the 'hood they wear white shirts and black pants and they don't sing like choirboys but they do have a staccato rhythm.
whose wings sing sacred songs to HeavenHow evocative of a flock of birds! Lovely poem...
Jingle Poetry - Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem.Kay - Thank you!Niamh - I love to see them as they migrate in huge flocks.Kay - I, too, stop to watch, and the sight of them turning through the sky as one always takes my breath away. I never seem to have a camera when I want one, either. Word phots will have to do, I guess.TWM - Funny!Cad - Thank you.
Yes, I do see it. :)There's a strange beauty to this time of year.