artwork used by permission of Catrin Welzstein
in association with d'Verse Poets
ERASURE
I am gone, and this goes on
You have your smoke
The girls talk quietly about their
lives
I am not here, but this goes on
Up and down the yard
The children run
Juliet picks flowers
As the sun begins to fade
Someone clears the plates
This goes on and I am gone
The way your smoke dissipates above,
Gone the way of dandelion fuzz.
Yeah it is like that at the passing for them left behind. i wonder sometimes how long will the dandelion be remembered when they are n conquerors or kings.
ReplyDeletereally interesting progression in this.....its easy to see all the life going on around you...identifying with the smoke and the dandelion....i can feel the emptiness....
ReplyDeleteThis captures that phenomenon exactly - how odd that all the ordinary things still happen when we're gone...
ReplyDeleteAnd yet, the dandelion is such a symbol for continuity. And life! Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteLife has to move on no matter what. Lovely expressions!!
ReplyDeletelife moves on... sometimes not noticing you as it passes... lovely poem... it hit home I must admit...
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