Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Illuminated

ILLUMINATED



You are framed in finest gold;

Brilliant pigments run you through.

Ancient beauty, but not old --

You are framed in finest gold.

Swirled and flourished stories told

By the manuscript of you,

You are framed in finest gold,

Brilliant pigments run you through.







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11 comments:

  1. Preeti S.September 30, 2014 at 10:14 AM

    I really love the structure and the rhyme scheme. Beautifully penned. :)

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  2. The BugSeptember 30, 2014 at 11:01 PM

    I like the structure too. I especially like: Swirled and flourished stories told By the manuscript of you... Very nice!

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  3. the walking manOctober 1, 2014 at 6:38 AM

    One September many years ago I fell asleep under a green canopy and next when I awoke the trees were bare and frost was covering my nose tip. I missed the gold rush that year.

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  4. Vandana SharmaOctober 20, 2014 at 7:06 AM

    Very beautiful land especially the scheme of the poem, is it any form if yes then which one, will try it!

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  5. Vandana SharmaOctober 20, 2014 at 7:12 AM

    oops its a triolet!

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  6. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)October 20, 2014 at 8:39 AM

    yes, i too enjoyed this tangled weave of a 'triolet'.

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  7. Kerry O'ConnorOctober 20, 2014 at 1:08 PM

    Such a lovely triolet.

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  8. Carrie Van HornOctober 21, 2014 at 8:27 AM

    Beautiful rhyme and verse....lovely writing Karen. :-)

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  9. brudbergOctober 21, 2014 at 3:23 PM

    I love triolets and this is a great example

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  10. Susie ClevengerOctober 21, 2014 at 8:17 PM

    Beautiful...I love the thought of someone being illuminated

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  11. kaykualaOctober 23, 2014 at 5:34 AM

    Rightly rhymed for a triolet. Wonderful lines Karen!

    Hank

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