and revealing myself one poem at a time
Ooouuuu! Beautiful metaphor!Love the last line.
I never thought I would say that coal was able to made into an erotic metaphor. But Karen you have made coal into an erotic metaphor.
Rough and smooth and sultry all at the same time, just the way coal should be.
Who would have thought anthracite had such beauty? Full marks you, for unearthing it.
Gnome - thank you!Mark - smilimg, smiling!Joseph - just the way lots of things should be! ;-)Dave - even your comments are poetic! Thanks to you!