and revealing myself one poem at a time
I like your word play, Karen. This spare poem is lively with it.
What all couches want to do -- spring away. Well done.
Gloomy, but fun! LOL
Liked that. Dark, but with a lightness to the lines.
beautiful word play.
smiles....well penned...i think imay have slipped my cover already and sprung...some days at least...
I love this play on words:And your living room nowCouches only this:Really nice "Magpie", Karen.
Yowsah! Welcome to the Magpie!
Really love the clever word play here..we who wait...also serve!!
One day I will be on the curb and the big open truck with the claw will come and then all that will be left of me is the comfort I once was able to give. And in that I will return to the place of couches and continue the circle.
I love how you use language - what you say SEEMS simple, but it's far from simple. Excellent!
Couldn't agree more with 'The Bug' (Never thought I say that :D)."Though weighty daysSap your springsAnd cause your back to sag."'Waiting' can be really haunting. Had missed this place.
Love your play on words - excellent!Anna :o]
great pun at the end