deluge
words fail
this cold
rushing deluge
fail
this drumming
rushing deluge
this streaming
streaking
sinking, sucking
rushing deluge
this
striking
sticking, stitching
rushing deluge
numbing
tumbling
running, ruining
this rushing
deluge
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Good construction, one that gives the poem a sense of hard, rapid motion...like a deluge.
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