Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Ecstacy














ECSTACY


In the warm
breath
of night,
bare breast
invites
the distant light
of stars;
sharp,
cold lances
pierce
the heart
that stills
beneath the trance
of otherworldly
light
and splits
open
to the night.

4 comments:

  1. Interesting, how you've combined the astral view with the erotic. I also see a sonogram.
    This is a bold piece and you've done it well.

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    1. Thank you, Kat. Coming from a such a poet as you, I am flattered.

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    2. The feeling is mutual, I assure you.

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  2. Yes, beautiful. And hooray, I can comment again!

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