Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.'
in memory
you stand
an abstraction
of sensuous delight
however
reverie out
of all proportion
with grim reality
does not withstand
a detailed scrutiny
i write to invent
not re-create
therefore
i must
state
you
are
a matter
of perspective
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Wow... that... was... Amazing!!!!
ReplyDeleteYou are a matter of perspective... FABULOUS LINE!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWell done, Karen.
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This is STUNNING - so brilliant. A matter of perspective, indeed. Fantastic write!
ReplyDeleteThoughtful and thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteAn excellent ending to this. I like that concept.
ReplyDeletenice...really cool closure on this...and true as well on how things hold up to the light...or dont under scrutiny....it is all perspective....
ReplyDelete"i write to invent
ReplyDeletenot re-create" LOVE this Karen!
you are a matter of perspective. What an excellent thought, and so true of most things, when you come to think of it.
ReplyDeleteha! cool close, cool piece all around!
ReplyDeleteThe visual effect is amazing. It takes some physical efforts to do unless there is a template (which I doubt there is one) It's great Karen!
ReplyDeleteHank